All Comments on 'Becoming His Slave Girl Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Not what it seems

This is just a sex story, nothing special.

LockitLockitalmost 16 years agoAuthor
Did you read part one?

Part one lays out the foundation for part two and I do not consider it just a sex story, nor did the people who sent me feedback in email. The story is a process darlin and is just a part of a whole. Good or bad... you can't please everyone. Some want just a sex story, some want more... some don't like my style, some do... But thank you for your comment either way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I liked it. Seemed far more than a sex story

It/they seemed introspective and feminine. This was, again, smooth and well done. Nice writing, young lady, and thank you for the good read.

SubleeSubleealmost 15 years ago
Well Done!

This story was very well written, I look forward to the next chapter.

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