All Comments on 'Becoming My Little Brother's Toy Ch. 02'

More dialogue in future chapters, please

Please continue story

5 Stars. THAT. WAS. HOT! I can’t wait to read more.

Have her set him up with a girlfriend of hers who doesn’t mind sharing and thinks it’s hot that the siblings have sex. They should take him shopping, try on lingerie for him, and blow him in the changing room. They can all go out to eat and play with each other under the table. Later, after the six months are up, the sister wants to continue, so they women decide to continue to share.

Love this story line...keep it going!

She clearly loves being submissive. Tristan needs to take complete control of Erin. He needs to introduce her to some of his male friends, maybe a female. Her submissive, slavish side, needs to be taken advantage of! More please!

Well crafted tale of incestuous development.

Your style is refreshing and extremely detailed, some things often left to the side in submitted errotica.

Of special mention . . . The length of your submissions ( double entendre) is most fitting to the scenario created.

Going five ( 5 ) stars due to the quality you have shared with us.

Great story greatly describes dominated feelings and subs keep it up and running with more please

Perfect - need more. Nicki -you are a nice author. We all want more -more - more. Keep it Up !!!

Very sexy story

Quite erotic seduction into tabu sex1

Wow!

A little too much like wham, bang, thank you man.

Loved it!!!!!!! His one horny dude. His mother should be paying attention or she'll be next. LoL!! Enjoyed your stories very much read a couple already.

I really like the comment from (3) months ago, about Erin finding a girlfriend for Tristan to dominate also...let the relationship go to becoming a throuple...even better...a HAREM!! THAT would be ssssoooo hot!!

Erin and Tristan's mom...???!!! Where did that come from...but is not out of the realm of possibilities!! Maybe she wants to be dominated, too...😳🥴

Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋💯

Love this story! Please add more chapters!

I wish the chapters were longer. But the story is really good

Fantastic storey! Keep the good work up and here's looking forward to a few more chapters......

I thought the whole story was excellent, Its well written ,and believable. I especially liked where the sisters reluctance lost over her lust for her brother . I hope there's another chapter of several . There's so many ways you could go with it , would love to have dad come home and catch them, only to blackmail her for the sex as well