by Dividence
An incredible first story and if the rest are like this, you would undoubtedly become a favorite author. Such originality but leaving so much not explained makes me yearn for more so please feel free to continue your work. Thanks for posting it.
Here's to hoping he takes his masters advice to heart and quickly absorbs as much knowledge from the Succubus as possible.
I very much agree with the comments noted by other people. Please keep writing, I loved your story. I am a big fan of magic and other sciences. You must continue on with this story for the sake of you fans.