All Comments on 'Bee and David Ch. 02'

Very enjoyable story....Absolutely adore Bee and her outlook on life even though it a little strange.

Please update soon

This was a lovely update. I really enjoyed it . I'm glad Bee and David got to know each other more and better. Can't wait to read more . Great job with this chapter.

I wonder what happened to Bee for her to be so against being in a relationship or being against marriage.

Great update.

Loving Mr. Crete, he deserves some happiness in my life.

Well I thought Bee was country girl fresh....like that she's a bit burnt around the edges. The age difference is hinted at often, but it isn't about that. The nature of his career work and background make him appear older. He sounds sexy as hell to me and I love the fact he's got tattoos. I wonder where else and how extensive. Always down for a sexy exploration for sure.

Please explore their respective love history. I think it would add depth to two promising personalities. She excites him in a fresh,but primal way. Quite lovely, I think and romantic.

I want to say thanks for the great read. Its a story i cant wait to watch blossom.

Five.

Bianca lay in her bed. He lied about where he was last night. for example

Bianca, great story, and I cannot wait for chapter three. Sort of wish my name was David Crete.

Please.

Great story. Enjoyed it and looking forward to chapter3. Hurry....

You get five stars . Excelllent writing

i cant wait until for the next insallment.

Keep up the good work.

The dialogue was well paced, natural. I hope my comment makes sense. :)

I thought the only good interacial stories on here were loose ends, and soular fiction and seven days etc. but I LOVE the story keep it up I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job!

This is developing into a very good story & I can't wait to get more! Come on girl, where is chapter 3, I added you to my favourites!!! I will have to give you detention! LOL I hope it becomes a series as its a wicked story or Life with a lot of Chess being played by the two characters!

Where's the next chapter?! :) loving it!

I loved this chapter so much! But please please please don't write about her inner goddess ever again. It just calls me back to 50 shades of shit so lol just stop with that. Five star writing though~

2 things though if he was from Newport he would have a slight welsh accent not a typical British accent which Is usually English.

The second thing being there is no men like that here especially not in the dreary land of Newport maybe Cardiff though haha!

Love this story. So sweet!

"Just another kid going through life so worried that I won't be accepted" Got the reference and it made laugh :)

I' am really enoying this story

I can't get enough of this story. Wonderfully written!

Some spelling and grammar mistakes, but a good story line.