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by TheRedChamber

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XactoXactoover 2 years ago

Nice twist. So many barriers are just imaginary. Thank you!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 2 years ago

In her mouth...so quickly...

Good Girl, Susan!

Where will you be after the show? :+)))

Your writing style is unique! I like it!

Your own voice. Not imitating.

I especially like your unexpected swerves.

And her accumulating confidence.

I want to date her!

And/Or Rachel...or both!

Special fondness for wordpersons...like You!

Great re-start! More, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, fun characters and a very smart ending. Found the Americanisms a touch jarring though, in a story meant to appear largely from the perspective of an Englishwoman

2soon2no2soon2noabout 2 years ago

I gave a 5 just because you flirt as a narrator, and I like it. A few words in the order wrong. Still a good read.

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