by NoBoundariesAnymore
Your writing skills are virtually unparalleled, perfect. Best I have seen in a first time contributor. I followed you in hopes of more. But one suggestion. I think readers will want more in the way of background. We know nothing about the woman or the man. They have never met before, but have a long aquiantenhip. Are they married people starting a new affair? Are they engaged by proxy? Maybe co workers meeting for the first time? This matters a lot.