by jc01xxx
You've crafted a plot that is erotic and mysterious and it begs for further development. the characters are compelling without being over-the-top and the plot line can go in any number of directions, including how it is that the house has this mysterious steel door that the parents don't know about ? Or have somehow avoided? Or ???
I knew a girl in high school from Paradise Valley. She lived one of those houses carved into the desert hills there. I wish I had paid more attention. What a good story!