All Comments on 'Behind the Steel Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
An intriguing opening . . .

You've crafted a plot that is erotic and mysterious and it begs for further development. the characters are compelling without being over-the-top and the plot line can go in any number of directions, including how it is that the house has this mysterious steel door that the parents don't know about ? Or have somehow avoided? Or ???

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
"discrepancy"

Should be discretion.

Hot story, thanks.

Brittni4uBrittni4uover 4 years ago
clever idea

The story is very erotic and builds up...5 stars from me...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved It!

I knew a girl in high school from Paradise Valley. She lived one of those houses carved into the desert hills there. I wish I had paid more attention. What a good story!

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My stories are interrelated but I try to make each one stand-alone so feel free to jump in wherever the interest strikes you. For the overall story, my recommended reading order is by date published, which also happens to be alphabetical order – kinda having fun with that. ...