by billie34c
This was a good read. I hope you write more. I'd be really interested to see where your imagination takes you.
Enjoyable, short story with a nice flow. Would love to read more if you write it
A fun narrative--though I couldn't help wincing on behalf of--and feeling sorry for--the main character. The apparent simplicity of the narrative style--the lack of literary embellishment--makes the story seem all the more real.
It’s a really sweet story - please write more and slip in a few more secrets too!
I think I should clarify that these events happened exactly as I described. Totally true.
It’s a lovely, sexy and naughty story and, yes, more little secrets would be fun to share!
More “totally true” events please, they’re fun to hear about. If you have run out of true ones, some fantasies will have to do!
Beautiful story - I love it! You have a talent for this, would be wonderful to see more.
What’s so great about this story is that it’s fun, and real and the author describes so well what it’s like when girls get touched up by random blokes who know they can get away with a certain amount of touching, but then biffs one of them hard when he has gone too far. Just what he deserved! He was way out of line! But what about the bouncer who pinched her nipples much too hard and hurt her? He deserves payback, but bouncers are big and strong and scary! A lot of what-ifs, but let’s hope hard that the author can write some more very soon. I just love the freshness and frankness of the writing! Thank you Billie34c, and please write some more for your growing readership! Lots of love from us all.