All Comments on 'Being Jim Ch. 08: Lightning Strikes'

by Frodov

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WTFOWTFOalmost 3 years ago

I was hoping for a “we lived happily ever after” ending. I couldn’t disagree with Kathie’s decision more vehemently as she threw away your love for a maybe. I cannot imagine how your losses have scared your soul.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

I have been so enthralled in your story . I haven't stopped to comment once . I knew by the title that something would separate you two . But that didn't keep the shock from me as I read Kathies devastating decision . And that your adventures with Barbra were years later . Hoping to hear much more about her in the next chapter . You are a truly gifted writer . I thoroughly enjoyed this entire tale . Thank you .

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