All Comments on 'Belinda's Eventful Year'

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P_AndererP_Anderer10 months ago

A good, engaging story, although maybe a little laboured in some parts. I was a little diappointed with the handling of the scene when Jeff blundered in on their lesbian triste. This was a pivotal moment in the whole story, but it was somewhat brushed off.

Still 5* from me for effort.

Beejay3Beejay39 months ago

What ends well is relished!

Nice they eventually got thru the rough stuff to end up together, after a couple of dalliances which helped them to weather the storm!

Mutual love which grew them together and looks great for the future!

Thanks for this well done. A pleasure reading it.

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Hello to anyone that might read my stories, Update 19/3/24: Hi, the follow up to ‘Real Lives, Imaginary Lovers’ should be published tomorrow morning (20th). It’s called ‘Real Lives, Incestuous Lovers’ and it follows a developing sexual relationship between a mother and her ...