by Briterotic
A good, engaging story, although maybe a little laboured in some parts. I was a little diappointed with the handling of the scene when Jeff blundered in on their lesbian triste. This was a pivotal moment in the whole story, but it was somewhat brushed off.
Still 5* from me for effort.
What ends well is relished!
Nice they eventually got thru the rough stuff to end up together, after a couple of dalliances which helped them to weather the storm!
Mutual love which grew them together and looks great for the future!
Thanks for this well done. A pleasure reading it.