All Comments on 'Bella and The Amulet of Nuzaleft'

There was a story here?

Hi @Anonymous, thanks for taking the time to read this. This is actually only part one of what is to be a pretty lengthy series (hopefully). The reason the title doesn’t say pt. 1 is because I reached the character limit lol. Next part is called “Bella and The Amulet of Nuzaleft 2” since I don’t have room for “pt.” Great question and a fair point.

The beginning is short although the setup of the dream worked very well.

Just as a suggestion, replace then”and” in the title and use an ampersand “&”. It should leave you the space you were looking for. I look forward to seeing more.

J.D.