All Comments on 'Belted, Branded, Subjugated'

Worth a read. Make the next one longer.

It reads as if you wrote it in about 15 minutes when you had nothing else to do and it comes across as the basis for a story yet to be written. That story could be an enjoyable read because some of your ideas are good. Use it as the basis for a 6k-9k (2/3 pages) story and I’m sure it will have a better reception.

For a short story to get a good rating it has to be exceptional. I won’t vote because I never give less than four stars. I leave the nastiness to others and do my voting by way of comments.

It is a nice fantasy and a good read while rubbing one out quickly.

How about a part two?

Just as well .

Imagine if she disliked him ….

The minute she's not looking he's jacking off. You do realize that the cage is a toy and that he can both masturbate and ejaculate while wearing it? And since he's a man and completely capable of over powering her, he's fucking her any time he wants to.

1 star

You realize as a sub, he doesn’t want to rebel right?

Pathetic

fantastic story and would love to serve you.

lacking a lot detail towards the end..

Great story of female domination, which is how it should be. I love when a pretty woman, especially one with nice legs, gets control of HER man and makes him do things he might not want to do. Thank you, Burning Silk. I wish I knew you personally.