All Comments on 'Ben Ch. 02: Amber, Alice, His Aunt'

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NevadidNevadid7 months ago

Very few people use the word "anointed" in casual speech let alone as often as you've over used it.

Gym52Gym524 months ago

An EXCELLENT premise, I hope that you continue to entertain us with further adventures of Ben and his assorted ladies

wrc264wrc2643 months ago

Pretty good story after all is said and done. Needs to be continued though and getting his Aunt/cousin (?) pregnant would be on of the main points. He should also go back and get his fathers secretary again and get her pregnant. He has not completed his harem and needs to get them all located in a house with him.

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Best to read my stories by Date. Some of my early work is Not the best, learned as I went along. Re: 'Zach Ch: 8 Part Series' stories were re-numbered by the ADMIN. The 'Widow' is a series and 'Powers' is the other. One 3 part story, "Zach Ch. 01-03 The Widow Farmer" got m...

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