All Comments on 'Beneath The Sacred Cloak'

You have excelled yourself with this beautiful story Dg. By the time I'd finished it I had a huge wet patch on my bedsheet! I'm going to have it re-read to me tonight by my cuckold. If he's a good boy, I'll sit on his face when he's finished. I wish I could give you more than 5 stars. What if I award 5 stars for each section? That would be appropriate, I think. Absolutely gorgeous, my dear. I really do admire your filthy imagination and your literary skill.

Easily, the author's best yet (with all due credit to her sister with whom Daddysgirlfl created this moving story). The reader moves from the esoteric and spiritual to the crude and public (strip club), complete with gawking howlers. Personalities move back and forth, good faces down evil, and light opposes darkness; a complex theme that is handily followed. NK

Utter garbage with the asshole Magnus, a fuck up who thinks he is god

One of the best stories on here, eroticism at its finest. Thank you

I’m sorry but this was just boring.

Interesting scenario, but I agree with Calulu482; most of the story was just boring, to the point where i just skipped over much of it looking for something to catch my attention. The three primary characters did not have enough depth to them to make me care what happened. What was there was well-written, I'll try a couple more of your stories.