Best Friend's Dad

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Bruce sat up from the cuddling position on the couch to face Erin, "What do you mean stop? Erin, you know I love you and you love me too right?"

Erin sighed, "Is it? I mean...we have this age gap. What would Stephanie say? What would my parents say? What would everyone say?"

"Hush...calm down. Erin, it will all be okay."

"What if it's not okay? What if I lose everything?"

Bruce tried to calm Erin's panic, "We both gain so much by being together though. Erin, do you love me?"

Erin got up from the couch and moved towards the door, "This was a mistake. I can't believe we did all of that. What was I thinking? I'm sorry I really am."

She made a beeline to the door but Bruce was right behind her, "Erin, answer me. Do you love me?"

Tears flowed out of Erin's eyes as she opened the front door. She held back an ugly cry as she started to step outside.

"Erin, please just tell me, do you love me?"

She turned back as she exited the house, "I don't think that's enough. I'm so sorry."

He could have tried to grab her but knew he had to let her go at that moment.

Erin got in her car as the ugly cry started. She was able to leave and drive back to her apartment alone as both of them wondered where their fling and feelings went wrong?

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nortythortsnortythorts7 months ago

Good first attempt. The church building connection didn't appeal to me but that's just personal taste. Your story would flow much better if you used much fewer single sentence paragraphs, paragraph breaks should serve as breaks in continuous text, though on this site it's better to avoid paragraphs longer than a few lines. HAve rated 4 stars though.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

The perversion o the church building was unnecessary and crude. It ruined a passable story line from that point on.

MNdreamsMNdreams7 months agoAuthor

There will be a second chapter to wrap up the story.

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey7 months ago

Wow. 5 Stars. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now8 months ago

Good story, suckie at the end... I hope there's more.

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