All Comments on 'Best Friend's Dad'

Nice. Love the stockings and garter belt.

Being a R.C. (Recovering Catholic) I the church tryst extremely hot.

Please continue! It can’t stop now.

Good story, suckie at the end... I hope there's more.

Wow. 5 Stars. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

There will be a second chapter to wrap up the story.

The perversion o the church building was unnecessary and crude. It ruined a passable story line from that point on.

Good first attempt. The church building connection didn't appeal to me but that's just personal taste. Your story would flow much better if you used much fewer single sentence paragraphs, paragraph breaks should serve as breaks in continuous text, though on this site it's better to avoid paragraphs longer than a few lines. HAve rated 4 stars though.