All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever Pt. 10'

Sad but wonderful.

Thanks again for sharing your heart...and your memories! Those milestones that both mark our path and shape our future...

Just love the beautiful and honest interaction between these two. One of the few sissy/trans stories that gets my lesbian juices flowing.

I'm confused. You ask for feedback and critique and when you get it, you basically say that everyone is wrong and you ignore it all. Did you ever think that when multiple people point something out, there could be validity to it? I can't read this.

he whispers

I begin

I gasp

I purr

I mumble

he shouts

I exclaim

he jests

he yawns

he mentions

I snicker

he teases

he interrupts

I sniffle

I sigh

Maybe seeing them all together (and this list is not nearly all of them) will penetrate your head. As you've been told many times, there is nothing wrong with "says". All your endless dialogue tags ruin your stories, as I can't help but picture you sitting there, thinking about what other tags you can stick in there. It's ridiculous and annoying and you need to stop asking for feedback.

How could you bring yourself to write this?

It’s like I have read the biography of my life, love it

TOO SWEET .I'D LOVE TO READ MORE.

CRITICS ARE LIKE A...... EVERYONE HAS ONE . BUT YOU JUST KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO..... TY!

I absolutely loved it. Kevin sounds like I used to be when I was a bit younger lol. But, Kevin sounded prettier than me. I would love it if she won him over to be his steady girl, proud to show her off with a night on the town or something

Wow that’s so good. You’re a heck of a story teller. Thank You. I give the whole story 10 stars…

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