All Comments on 'Best of Friends, Now and Forever Ch. 05'

by ZimmMaster

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Aww that's a cute story. Hope u write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please get the next chapter up quick i love this story and cant wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
more pls!!!!!!!

Ur an amazing writer please please put more i love ur style <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Update soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

perfect story, when will there be more

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035over 11 years ago
Very Realistic

I wanted to take a minute and comment on how realistic this feels. The young teens act like I would think kids would act who have responsable parents. I do think the moms might of been a touch to openminded about the "sex is ok if your ready for it at 13 thing" but otherwise I liked how they acted. I love the kids and Jason reminds me on how I acted at 13 with girls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More!

That was sooo good! Write more!!!! Soon. I love how you set up the story but you should wait until they are a little older than 13 to get sexually active. Don't get me wrong I'm not dissing 13 year olds it would just seem more romantic if they were like 16. :)

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