All Comments on 'Best Sex Ever'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Take a fucking grammar class for fuck sakes

Learn the difference between past and present participle you talentless fucktwit

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
did you read your story?

Language and sense and grammar is atrocious. Barely able to understand and all too rushed with no proper explanation or scene setting.

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