All Comments on 'Best Weekend of my Life'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter6 months ago

Good story/plot, but you need an editor

PaperbackreaderPaperbackreader6 months ago

Very clinical telling of this story. No description of how anyone felt during the sex. Could have said "I had sex with a couple of women, one anal"

MafenMafen6 months ago

Needs more than an editor. You can't polish a turd.

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