All Comments on 'Beta Male Slave Academy Ch. 01'

wish i was sent for training

Please more I love this an so want to be a slave. I dress like one and must be made to obey

Enjoyed reading it, please continue.

New chapter is currently pending and coming soon! I hope you're all ready for it to get more humiliating and dirty!

New chapter will come out shortly. It will be TWICE is long and THREE TIMES as humiliating.

A good start. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love that you said three times as humiliating. Love humiliation domination.

How about some anal fucking machine training, could be a good twist! Excellent so far!

Can't wait for it to get even kinkier and depraved.

I like it. Good detail, just enough character development. And to the point. Question, do all submissive males need to be pathetic? Does the possibility exist that some do like to please, can last, and pack five to six inches?

To keep the story going , you need to bring in more hope for the main character while betraying at the last minute. Wife needs to keep showing love to him but only as a pure cuckold. He needs to submit fully to all humiliation of cuckold while being made into a sissy with perfect female features. Bring in details of his emotions with each process of turning him into a sissy cuck.

Love this story, made a brilliant start, can't wait to read next chapter, 5*

A Whole 48 Seconds Is Generous!

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Hallo Tazokm!

Being that I have some experience as a Dominant leather "dyke" myself, I can assure you that males like Patrick are nothing more than whiny little bitches!... Now that's an idea maybe Miss Carly will keep Suzie for herself, and bitch him out... wouldn't Patrick look cute down on his knees in the men's toilet drinking piss and sucking cocks!?!

Yeah your leather mistress Miss Carly, she is your real story..

Thank-You... 5-Stars..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..