All Comments on 'Beta Male Slave Academy Ch. 02'

by Tazokm

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GcoachGGcoachGalmost 4 years ago

You lost me as soon as I saw the “scat” tag!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Superb

Great work. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Great story so far. Can't wait for part 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
great work

This story is great! Can't wait for more!

theybakecakestheybakecakesalmost 4 years ago
Good, but...

I enjoyed the story; however, you were unintentionally homophobic in many places. I understand and can appreciate being forced to act outside a given sexuality during humiliation play. But please next time be cautious as to how you describe same-gendered sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Love it!

Great start, I hope there's more coming. I don't agree with the "homophobic" comments, you are expressing what is in your character's head, and it's more humiliating for him if he is grossed out by homosexual acts but performs them anyway.

Personally my fetishes are more in line with the way Slave A is being treated so I hope there could be a chapter or two from his point of view.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I keep checking back for part 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

where is part 3 of such an amazing story?

GayKatGayKatover 1 year ago

Aw... You Wimped-out!

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Hallo Tazokm!

It was starting to show a little promise with Miss Maggie telling her toilet slave "Alright toilet slut, I hope you're hungry!"... And that's the moment you chose to fucking wimp-out... Really!?!... Wow!... What the fuck is this "Beta Male Slave Academy?"... Because it's sounding a lot like some gay European boys clubs,,, yes!

Alright, 5-Stars... But we're disappointed!

The Black Queen and Gay Kat..

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