All Comments on 'Between The Walls Ch. 05'

Well written and thought out. Although a short story, i can see the time that was put into the characters and their dynamic. Love it all! You’re writing is spectacular

Please develop JD's character. I want to know more about him. I like him and Louise together. I hope you keep Louise and Johnny as friends. Johnny seems very over protective, keeping things from Louise. He's also very bossy with her.