by Smokey125
Lemme guess - she saw a cliffhanger?
In all seriousness, great to see another instalment to this series. This one in particular was one of my favourites!
Thank you so much for posting another sequel.
tbh but til now Farrah's nature always seemed vague, now that you've established she actually a supernatural entity its nice to see a genre shift.
That was some intense nightmare Rachel had , but is it over ?
Our lovely Brides seem to have a supernatural visitor of the devilish variety .
Well written series and clever how you go from dark to light and back to dark again .
Hallo again, well Smokey... I should have paid more attention to the title,,, yes!... The first page and a half of "Chapter 5, is White Hot Erotic Lesbian Sex!", I was getting all warm and wet... oh yeah, 💯 5-stars all the fucking way!... Then Farrah makes her appearance... and Smokey, I thought the way you were writing your Farrah character was really 🔥 hot and sexy!... But now with this new version of Farrah, the story has changed from 🔥 hot lesbian sex, to some silly science fiction fairy tales¿?
For the writer 5-⭐'s but sorry Love, no orgasms 😞!
Gay Kat..
I'm sorry you didn't care for this installment—or at least its second half. I can understand your points and take them into consideration. But even though you're through with this series, if you come back to check and see this comment, you're of course welcome to check out anything else in my little library. There's no shortage of additional fun BDSM stories to be found here—of course, as I'm a lesbian, they're pretty much all girl-on-girl. Some are brutally hardcore like these, some are more gentle. If what you said in your comment on part 4 is true and you prefer girl-on-guy BDSM, I'm not sure you're as gay as your name says. But either way, I'd be glad to recommend some stories. You could also leave me feedback with your e-mail and we could chat some more from there. Take it easy, until next time, Smokey
The Translator Got Me Again,,, Yes!
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Hallo Smokey!
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Well my friend, basically the earlier comment that I posted is correct, but now that my English has improved I can read what was posted, and I see it's not word for word as I wrote it!!
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And this question never got posted, [Rachel reached the shower, and drew back the curtain. ... She could not believe her eyes!] _ Well okay Smokey I bite... what did Rachel see???
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Thank-you... 5-More Stars, but no orgasms, and we're still disappointed😞!
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From your two kinky dyke friends,
The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼!
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