All Comments on 'Beyond Monetary Needs Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good for second story but no depth with emotions and no vivid details.

wallace99wallace99about 2 months ago

Can't wait to read second chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Thats a great statrt. Wainting for part 2

Jim_RossJim_Rossabout 2 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the great feedback! Part 2 is out now!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A great start, I am hooked. Can't wait for more.

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