by subswitchdiwakar
Amazing start. Loving the storyline and the dynamics of the relationship between Bhavna and Diwakar. Looking forward to read the next chapter. Keep it up!
Thanks guys! Chapter two is in the making. Will post it in a few days :)
Amazing !!!
The details in the storyline is awesome.
As a word of advice, if you could somehow elaborate Bhawna, how dominant her looks are it would be much sexier !!!