All Comments on 'Big Bad Wolf'

1* There is NOTHING erotic about rape or rape play, whatever you want to pass it of as, if you had been raped or knew someone who was, you wouldn't be writing about 'rape play' that is just BULLSHIT!

Good story!

4

Should be a "just sex no story". didn't like it.

Besides the consistent grammar problems, the story had no real emotion. I just couldn't get into the characters. Also, the whole "big bad wolf" thing seemed forced and unnecessary.

Get an editor or don't write at all. The only good thing I can say about this was that it was a short mess, instead of being a long mess, so I didn't have to read more of this.

Sorry, but that just plain sucked!

Only real redeeming quality was it revolves around a husband and wife having 'quality time' with each other. After that it pretty much looses momentum. The sadistic treatment of his wife drops the star count for me. That this type of encounter occurs while the kids are awake and in the house is troubling. Especially as one seems old enough to be doing chores unattended. That's how the unintended happens with kids, and little Johnny gets his first lesson in deviate lovemaking from his parents. 2☆

Needing fantasies like this can’t possibly be a part of a healthy marriage

Confusing. Where her breast on fire or what was going on?