by Lily Peg
Thanks anon cowardly comments you don't need to read these stories why not just crawl under your nasty little carpet and go to sleep creep.
Not bad for a starter, personally I like the stories to be longer but hey, you're here and trying and that's the main thing... Oh and ignore the haters who leave Anon-comments, they don't have it in them to write a story so they come here and pick on those who do... Keep it up, you'll get better...
A hot short story. It's a real gift to be able to tell a good story with so few words, I certainly can't.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Thanks l was working on it being longer but that sort of came out like that in the sequence of events. Thanks for your support and positive feedback. Anons trolls can go and play with themselves losers.