All Comments on 'Big Johnson Trucking Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, that plot twist. Wasn't expecting a furry transformation.

bhojobhojoover 1 year ago

Another five stars but I had a moment where I lost immersion. Rose is Officer Clooney - but she has hair died Blue. In my understanding it a general norm that police officers are only allowed to use hair dye of natural colors. also as her blond roots are showing it can't be a recent die job. this kind of made me lose immersion i.e a a what the fuck moment :) .

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

First stories were good and this one should have been sci-fi or something. None had a BDSM THEME, borderline minded control maybe....

Ghosted1974Ghosted1974over 1 year agoAuthor

Nope. No furries here. All monstergirl. There is a difference. ;-)

bhojo - Eh! Chalk it up to one of the reasons she’s not liked by most of the department. I try to be factual for the most part with my story telling but sometimes I get things wrong. Thanks for the five stars!

Yeah, I get it. I realize BDSM is vaguely hit upon in the story so far. I had planned on more, and there will be more in later chapters. Though probably not enough to warrant the BDSM tag, but *shrugs* we’ll see where it ends up.

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