All Comments on 'Big Johnson Trucking Ch. 05'

Just dropped into this story with ch 5 - seems like a special or niche fetish one, sorry, that didn't work for me ... Where there some pictures in earlier chapters? Is this special kind of transformation theme similar to comic or film that I am not aware of? ... Based on this writing alone the appeal did not come alive for me, didn't pass more than a few pages. Feel a bit of surprise about missing out, as it seems otherwise very well crafted, tons of potential fun in reading. If only, imagination were lit up in a right way.

Dear Anonymous - As a piece of Practial advice start at chapter 1 , continues tthrough the chapters in ascending order then stop. For ghosdted - another thrilling installment , and yes everything is not supposed to make sense from day one else how would we have that moment of thrill in the big reveal. There are hints that this is deliberate and the Government is too accomodating not to have a fair understanding of what and how this came about.

Feel bad for Lance, seems Rebecca was constantly cheating on him while he was doing his best to be a good husband. I get as a reader it's supposed to be a form of punishment for him, but he is not even aware of it and it seems he genuinely changed for the better. Really detracts from my opinion of Rebecca as a character. Can't really feel much sympathy for her anymore. She didn't have to cheat on Lance and lie to him, she could have found a new love. Takes a really shitty person to do something like that.

Oh btw I read all the flashback stories first if anyone is curious why I'm so interested in Lance, Rig and Rebecca's story.

@Sniperking Don’t feel too bad for Lance. You’ll find out much later in the story but, yeah. Just don’t. 😉