Big Surprise

Hi, all! This is the first short story I've ever written, so please be kind. Although, I am open to helpful constructive criticism. I hope you enjoy 😊

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It was Friday night, and Jessica was carefully driving along the treacherous, winding countryside roads of the National Forest. She and her best friend Ivy were headed up towards the meditation retreat that Jessica co-owned with her fiancée Greg. It was almost pitch black, the clouds allowing just a sliver of moonlight to illuminate the landscape of trees and mountains, though it seemed the forest was alive with a cacophony of sounds, the wildlife taking advantage of the cover of darkness.

'I can't thank you enough for agreeing to be my guinea pig for the weekend. I'll show you what I've been working on for the retreat's grand opening, and we can test all the spa facilities! Greg's visiting his family, so it'll just be the two of us.' Jessica said, as she pulled into the car park.

'That's alright, it's not as if lounging in the hot tub, drinking champagne, and gorging on chocolates all weekend is any hardship. Plus, I've still got to do a couple more paintings for my gallery exhibition next month, and I'm sure the forest will make for a lovely subject.' Ivy replied, with a smile.

Not long after, Jessica and Ivy pulled up into the retreat's car park. Jessica helped Ivy remove her suitcase from the car and began to lead her past the retreat's main building, and deeper into the forest, following the pathway to the cabins.

'Nearly everything is in place, we're just waiting for the air conditioning units to arrive, so it might get a little hot. Let me know if you can think of anything else we're missing.' Jessica said, as they reached the cabin that Ivy would be staying in. Jessica unlocked and opened the door, and Ivy started wrestling her luggage over the threshold.

'I'd love to stay to help you get settled in, but the drive up has worn me out, I'm absolutely shattered. I'm going to head back up if that's alright?' Jessica asked.

'Of course, I can't wait to get into bed anyway, it's been a long day.' Ivy replied. The friends said their goodbyes for the night, hugging and agreeing to meet back up at the main building for breakfast the following morning.

Ivy began to settle in, unpacking her suitcase, and heading into the bathroom to wash up and change into her nightgown. By the time she was finished, she began to see what Jessica meant about it getting a little bit hot, and opened the window, before she got into bed. Ivy tried to get to sleep, but she was still too warm. She had already removed the duvet from her body, but it wasn't enough, and she slid the out of her nightgown, baring her body to the air.

Eventually, Ivy felt a breeze rolling in through the ajar window, caressing over her now naked breasts, which caused her nipples to begin to tingle and harden. She couldn't help herself and found herself reaching up to run a thumb over each of her erect nipples in response, the sensation making her warm between her thighs. She continued to thumb her left nipple, over and over, but brought her right hand to warmth of her sex, giving her pussy a gentle rub.

Ivy parted her thighs and slid her fingers to the wetness that was beginning to drip there, drawing it up over her clit. She moaned into the night, drawing her fingers in slow sensual circles over and over, ever so gently, and though her clit began an aching throb, she never once increased her tempo, preferring to take her time with her caresses. Her breath began to quicken as her pleasure increased, but still she kept her touch slow and gentle, the pleasure was almost torturous, but it was sweet torture, and she couldn't stop. Her body became tighter and tighter, her pussy tingling all over, as it always did right before she came. It felt so unbelievably good, far too good to handle and she finally moaned out her release, euphoria flooding her body, and she whimpered as her pussy pulsated with her orgasm.

The moment Ivy cried out her climax, a ferocious roar had echoed throughout the forest. Sleepily, Ivy forced herself to get up and close the window, just in case anymore loud noises would disturb her in the night. Through her sleepy haze, she could have sworn that there was a rustling in the trees nearby, but she was just too tired to care, and collapsed back into bed.

Ivy woke up the next morning feeling refreshed, she had slept very well in the end. She washed and got dressed, ready to meet Jessica for their day together. They spent the day relaxing, using all the spa facilities, Jessica had even called in a favour and asked a masseuse to come in for the day.

'Mmm... This is the life. How are you finding the resort? Did you think of anything extra that we need to put in the cabins?' Jessica asked, as she and Ivy simmered away in the spa's jacuzzi, feasting on a platter of chocolate and strawberries.

'Yes, I could get used to this. When I woke up this morning, I couldn't believe how gorgeous the views are, just untamed nature as far as the eye can see. The only thing I could do with is the aircon you mentioned, the weather's quite warm, and I had to close the window in the end because of all the noise.' Ivy replied.

'The aircon was meant to be here last week, I'll have to chase them up later whilst you paint or do some reading or something. I've got some spare earplugs if you'd like them for tonight though.'

'Ooh yes, that would be handy Jess, thank you.'

Later that evening, Jessica led Ivy to a beautiful vista spot which was not too far from the cabin, though it required them to leave the beaten track of the pathways behind.

'Right, I'm going to have to love you and leave you, if that's alright? I've really got to track down those aircons, to make sure they arrive before the grand opening. You can find your way back to the cabin, right? Just give me a message if you get yourself into trouble and I'll come running.' Jessica said.

'Yeah, it's not too far, I'll be fine, I'll see you tomorrow.' Ivy replied, setting up her easel and supplies.

Scenery landscapes were Ivy's specialty, and the forest was inspiring some of her greatest work, but because of this she lost track of time. She knew she had to get back to the cabin by dark, but she had left it a little too late and nightfall had descended quicker than she realised.

Ivy grabbed her painting supplies and started making her way back down towards the pathway. As she attempted to navigate the darkness with the torch from her phone, the sounds of animal growling erupted. Distracted by the noise, Ivy tripped up over a tree root and fell to the ground. Luckily, Ivy was unharmed, though her phone had slid several metres away from her.

The growling animal sounds were right behind her now though, and Ivy scrambled to quickly get back up, then broke out into a run. Whatever was making those noises could not be friendly, and it was chasing her! She ran towards the pathway lights as fast as she could and was relieved when she finally made it. Her legs felt like lead weights, but she knew she couldn't stop until she arrived back at the cabin.

Being on the lit foot path meant that Ivy was able to safely increase her pace, and she sprinted along, the cabin finally in front of her. She quickly opened the door and locked it behind her. She listened out for any movement outside and was relieved when she heard none, and her breathing returned to normal.

Ivy realised she would have to use the landline to call Jessica but decided to leave it until the morning, when they would be able to retrieve her lost phone in the safety of daylight. She was absolutely drenched in sweat, but after a shower she felt much better and decided to read on her kindle for a couple of hours. The night was even hotter than the night before, and by the time she was ready to go to sleep she was sweating again. She would have to open the window. The forest was alive with sounds again, but there was nothing that seemed untoward. She climbed back into bed and read for another half an hour, but the outside sounds were starting to irritate her. She remembered the earplugs that Jessica had earlier retrieved for her and fetched them out of her bag. They did the job of muffling the sound enough for Ivy to feel sleepy again, so she set her kindle back down and closed her eyes.              

When she awoke a short time later, she felt disorientated and groggy with sleep. Her senses were dulled by the pitch-black of night, and from the earplugs she was wearing. Ivy tried to force her brain to wake up faster, she wasn't certain, but something didn't feel quite right. She was confused by the sensations she was feeling, it was though she was weighed down, with a tightness in her stomach. There was a warmth and a rumbling coming from her core, and her brain fired up with activity as it finally registered movement on the bed with her. She realised that she was pinned to the bed, her thighs held spread, and there was something pressed up against her pussy. She couldn't see what was happening to her, and in a panic, she scrambled to get away, but she was held too firmly. Her arms were free though, and she ripped out the earplugs that were disorientating her. The room came to life, and suddenly some of the puzzle was pieced together. There was an inhuman growling coming from between her legs, something was breathing in the scent of her pussy, inhaling deeply and grumbling with pleasure at what it found there.

Ivy's brain was awash with thoughts of escape but came up with little solution. Even if she could free her legs, she had no idea what she was facing as clouds were blocking moonlight passing through the bedroom window. She cursed the loss of her mobile phone, if she could make it to the cabin's kitchen then she would be able to use the landline to call for help, but she had no idea how she would reach it, especially with no weapon at hand. She struggled with all her might as she tried to reach the lamp on the bedside table, but it didn't seem to take any effort for the creature to keep her pinned.

Ivy froze in shock as she felt her slit begin to be probed. The creature had begun to lick her! She didn't know what to do, and held her breath as the creature's strong, thick tongue began to move against her pussy lips, upwards, in slow, long licks. She let loose her breath as the tongue dipped in and probed her hole, tasting the honey that had gathered there.

'Oh God, help me.' Ivy whispered, as the creature growled it's pleasure at the taste of her.

Ivy gasped as the tongue travelled upwards, bringing her wetness to her clit, rolling over and over the sensitive flesh. Her body couldn't help but respond to the creature's ministrations, and she couldn't believe she was beginning to enjoy being eaten out by God knows what! There was no denying it though, when the creature began to suckle on her clit, she couldn't help but moan in pleasure. She knew she should be trying to get away, but she couldn't. She was lost to the sensations, the suction on her clit left her throbbing and needing more, and she reached out to bring the creature even closer. Ivy was startled as her right palm brushed against what felt like an arm covered in long hair, but at that same moment the creature began to give her clit rapid flicks, and she forgot her surprise, each flick of the tongue hitting her body like bolts of lightning. She could barely catch her breath now, her body was squirming, taking her higher and higher, until she just couldn't take any more and she screamed out as she exploded in pure white-hot pleasure.

Ivy shook on the bed as the tension was released throughout her body. As she came back down, Ivy opened her eyes. Moonlight had finally filled the room and Ivy gasped as she witnessed what could only be described as Bigfoot, looming over her, with his big, thick cock erect in his hand. She didn't even have time to get used to the alarming sight, for the second she opened her eyes he had lined his cock up with her and immediately plunged deep into her swollen, dripping pussy.

Ivy's hips jerked forward, and her eyes went wide, in shock as her cunt stretched to fit his size. The Bigfoot groaned as her tightness gripped him, and despite the initial shock he began to fuck her at once, pulling out nearly almost all the way and then slamming back, deep into her wetness. The Bigfoot had picked up his pace and was relentlessly fucking her hard and deep, not slowing down for a second. The sounds filling the room were overwhelmingly erotic to Ivy; the Bigfoot growling loudly, her incessant moans of pleasure, the headboard crashing into the wall, but most of all, the sounds of their bodies colliding, the sound of her wet pussy being penetrated over and over.

Ivy's body was tightening around the Bigfoot's cock, as each thrust hit her g-spot. On the Bigfoot's next thrust Ivy screamed, losing her mind to the nonstop onslaught of his dick inside her. The climax hit her like a freight train, her body convulsing in an orgasm that seemed to last forever. Ivy's pussy gripped and milked the Bigfoot's cock tightly, causing him to let out a ferocious roar as his dick pulsated with his ejaculation, cum barrelling out of him and filling Ivy's pussy, which had continued to milk him throughout.

Ivy was completely and utterly spent, and it took a while for the aftershocks of her orgasm to subside. When she was finally able to open her eyes again, she was shocked to see the Bigfoot had gone, the window left wide open. She herself almost couldn't believe what had just happened, she sure as hell couldn't tell anyone about it. She had been thoroughly fucked by Bigfoot, and thoroughly enjoyed it!

The next day, Ivy and Jessica returned to the vista spot to look for Ivy's lost phone. After a while curiosity got the better of Ivy.

'Jess, there was some strange growling last night, that's how I dropped my phone in the first place. What sort of animals live in the forest?'

'There are all sorts, deer, wolves, bears, you name it. Some people even claim to have seen Bigfoot.' Jessica said with a small smile.

'Bigfoot?'

'Yeah, a few years ago I used to come here to hike and camp, and I know it was my imagination, but I could have sworn I saw a glimpse of him myself.' Jessica replied.

'It's actually part of the reason I persuaded Greg to build the retreat here, he wanted it in the city, but I told him that the sightings might bring in customers who wanted to search for Bigfoot.'

Ivy looked at her friend, and with this revelation she knew that she was not the only one that had experienced the best fucking of her life, from one very horny Bigfoot.