All Comments on 'Biggest Fan Futa Ch. 02'

Continue cause you're really good

Amazingly good

Love the story! I like it when they lose control of themselves and just give over to their primal selves. The dynamic with Ellie being there is really good too! Thanks for the read, looking forward to reading more of you!

Hope you continue the story

I think there should be a 3rd part where Ellie runs out of vacation days and has to go back to work and while she does gets fucks Gwen and makes him submit to her and Gwen and hera both break up with ellie

An amazing story. The 3 way dynamic, with each character having needs -some they struggle to admit- and pursues them.

Of course, this sort of thing offers endless material for storytelling (more, please).

Thanks for sharing your talent and imagination.

Solid character setup you should continue this story!

5 stars

I loved how you set it up, and how Ellie is the one who went full tilt on it. The characters were very strongly written. I also love how finally someone showed a little attention to the pussy of a hermaphrodite, for some reason all the stories I have read the pussy keeps getting ignored. The writers will write the character is a hermaphrodite, the ass and cock gets served but not the pussy.

I do agree that more chapters would be good, maybe have Hera and Ellie play too. Then as the tour wraps up the3 of them have a choice, does Hera want them to go with her, is Gwen and Ellie willing to give up their lives to stay with Hera

thank you

This is great I hope you add to it

Non-con, or dub-con should've been one of the tags. I felt like they both just plain used him over and over again. Ellie claims she loves him, but clearly not enough to respect his wishes and, well, Hera was just....god awful personality wise. A third chapter where they reconcile is sorely needed, or, as mentioned before, a dub-con/non-con tag for the story would be appreciated. Doubt any of the above mentioned stuff will happen tho, given the authors long absense from writting on this site.

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3/5. Sex scenes in a bubble where hot, but, with context, I just end up feeling bad for Gwen.