All Comments on 'Biggest Risk of My Life Ch. 04'

we want to know what happens when he leaves and returns-as himself and who she becomes or goes back to being . her father should be dealt with extremely hard. does she go back into her old shell. or will she loosen up and be a sex maniac. please let her go next chapter enough sexually treatment

The lols seem unnecessary

Point noted and accepted. Others have mentioned this also. So "text speak" will be eliminated from any future new stories. Unfortunately, I have already finished this 8 chapter story and am too busy to go back and re-edit.

Five stars! I love how you have developed this story. Your character descriptions are masterful. I hope to learn from you as I continue my "Kitten" stories. Dying to read the next chapters.