All Comments on 'Bill and Claire's Late Awakening'

They should visit tom in Texas and continue with their fantasy

I liked the story. I generally will say nothing if a story is just plain bad, but for a writer who shows promise, I will give my two cents worth. I liked this story as a whole, which is why I just have one criticism and I hope it is taken as being constructive.

As background, I Have been in an open marriage and participated in the swinging lifestyle. The story would be more realistic if Claire and Bill had discussed and agreed to bringing in a third (or couple) to their bed BEFORE doing so. For them to keep saying it can never happen, then just out of the blue, invite a total stranger to their room and having sex without clearing it with each other doesn't generally happen.

I know these are fantasies and maybe that is the scenario the author wanted.

As I said, I liked it and it was well written, but that detail did detract from my enjoyment a bit.

Mick

nice story but....Jim/Ted?

I really enjoyed reading it...like two things especially.... 1) author kept everybody together and hubby involved.. none of this crap of going off by yourself to fuck without hubby present 2) everything was so unplanned and spontaneous .. 10 stars