All Comments on 'Bill and Jeans Adventures Ch. 02'

Well done on your second chapter. A fun read and well written.

Thanks, Darkmind I would not have gotten this far without your help.

Chapter seemed very rapey....

Five star rating for Ch 2....but almost a (4)...

The "force" of the process was pretty intense, and it also seemed to me the was LOTS of coercion on Stan's part...which s gonna translate into the process with Jean and her "training"...

Marie and Jackie-yes, supersluts they are, and their roles in Jean's "overhaul" are gonna be borne out her, shortly...how the author wrangle this is gonna have a great bearing on the rating received for future chapters...

On to Chapter 3, see where this goes!!