All Comments on 'Billion Dollar Slaves 01 Ch. 03'

sick sick sick sick sick sick sick sick sick what kind of person would do that !??????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chapters 1 and 2 were AWESOME! this one was horrible. hope chapter 4 gets it back on track.

While the writing still follows the same style, I have to wonder how sadistic you are going to become with this. One of the things I most enjoy about BDSM is the fact that most "Masters" are not cruel. They explain the things to come, and they take care of their slaves. There is a certain responsibility each Master undertakes when he is training his sluts. I'm thinking this particular character is cruel beyond measure. While his ministrations are quite controlled, he has no feeling toward these women as anything more than objects. I understand the appeal of this but to take their humanity could only result in some sort of rebellion.

I will keep reading. I hope he becomes a bit softer as the story progresses.

how could you write about this happening thats disgusting

Beautiful erotic pain!! And I love the idea of modifying a slave's body. Great job!

Nocturna1962

Sick, twisted and cruel....I'm loving this story!

My favorite dreams. Tattooing beautiful women ! I love those big Gipsy or Creole rings in all kinds of piercings ! Ears, septum, nipples and Labia !!

Whole series worthless literotica as it is riddled with bad grammar, misused and misspelled words. All due to no human editing and relying solely on spell check; which does not know the difference of phonetically identical words. Waste of data space and time required to read such piss poor garbage.

Pummel187 kindly remember this is a work of fiction.