by SteveWallace
Thoroughly enjoying the story. The days without a new chapter are a little less happy for me.
Thank you for writing!
I have enjoyed all of your stories. When writing a story this long it can be easy to mix up months or names. This isn't a novel being published with a publisher and proof readers. It is remarkable that you keep all the names, places, events, etc. as consistent as you do. I always disregard comments by anyone named anonymous. You put your name on your story, but they choose to hide behind anonymous. Let them try to write a story and see how difficult it can be to do. Keep up the good work.
First half of the chapter sets it in April, but the second half is in November?