All Comments on 'Billy Ch. 02 - R&D'

ROFLMAO!!! I love Jonathan's reaction to his newest concubine. Eagerly awaiting part three.

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BTW, I did catch several errors, but the most egregious was:

"Although the task sounds impossible, it immediately peaked my interest."

Don't feel badly though, this one has bitten me in the ass too. The correct word is 'piqued'.

I really like everything about these stories; setting, characters, and interactions. I look forward to reading where you go with it. Thanks

Nothing like enjoying a fun loving Sci-fi story . I look forward to enjoying more from your intriguing mind. Thank you.

Lighthearted and fun, not quite the same style as #1 but enjoyable nonetheless. 5 star here!

Please continue! It reads well and your character design is so gooood.

It was lovely to read another chapter of this story, thank you! There were a couple things that could have been caught with another editing pass, but they didn't take away from the charm.

Like others, I would really enjoy a continuation of this story. Certainly a new chapter for the new android, and another for the rear admiral in command of their new ship posting. Can you give them each individual characters?

Although both could have blisteringly, kinky sexiness, could the android be extremely submissive, and the admiral dominant with an amusing underlying kindliness? Perhaps there are space pirates in their future ….

Please consider getting help with a re-edit of the first chapter; it very badly needs it.