All Comments on 'Bimbo Outbreak Pt. 02'

It's still got a lot of mistakes and could be better. Bear with me, dearest reader, rewrites are a lot more work than I anticipated. I'll be more cautious in future. I am looking for a Literotica editor at the moment so hopefully that will help soon. Thanks for reading!

It’s still entertaining and more than a bit of a mystery of where are the men? We’re they transformed, eaten, dead on the basement floor?

Nice! i hope you continue

Part 3 has been submitted for a few days now. So are a few other new stories. Just waiting on the mods to review and approve them. Thanks for your patience.

Hilarious and hot, I’m still laughing over the branch manager thought. Hang in there Tom. Absolutely love this already, was never interested before and I’m glad I clicked on this series.

Love the detailed descriptions....and there were a couple of descriptions that had me laughing out loud. I'm looking forward to future reads.

I'm glad you are enjoying it; thanks for letting me know!