All Comments on 'Bimbo Roommate'

Seriously? Was it really necessary to mess around with the pronouns for a fictional character? It actually makes the story more difficult to read, especially in the beginning when your paragraphs aren't properly organized. You can do better, daddymoth

I lay in bed reading this and playing with myself until I came. Loved it

Does Dylan have multiple personalities or is it more than one person?

You people act like these are professionally paid writers and authors. If you want professionally written stuff, dole out some money at The Adult Stores and various online Adult Sites.

Get a grip and quit your whining. Damn...

I like Dylan's pronouns, but that's not the biggest thing you need to hear as an author, but the pacing itself is too quick. Your main snapped and made it work with no work or buildup, so there's not any actual payoff, it's just a script being recited. There's no details.

I like the mix of the new age thoughtfulness of being inclusive with pronouns, combined with turning a women into an absolutely mind fucked bimbo slave girl

The different pronouns make the story a chore to read. Just leave it him and her.

Damn these comments are hella anti-nonbinary jfc

Thank you for including the use of they/them pronouns for the mc; representation matters even in erotic literature

Hot! Haha love the acronym; it really shows off Dylan's sense of humour. Would love to read more!

Lotta ignorant people in these comments. Thanks for normalizing non-binary pronouns— very cool to see in a fun story for which that wasn’t the focus

I have a few friends who use they/them.

They all have multiple personalities. True story.

So fun!!! I love it :)

Wow, that sucked. Coulda been a good story but the stupid pronouns ruined it.

>>I have a few friends who use they/them.

>>They all have multiple personalities. True story.

LOL, 'multiple personalities' isn't even a real diagnosis. Stop watching so much bad TV and being so bigoted.

OP: This was a good story.

What most people have already said - the pronouns only made it uncomfortable to read. My pronouns are wy/pierdalaj.

Old to be jewel and become a bimbo sucking men's cocks did he come see keep a cock in her mouth in one of her ass in one of her p**** did she ever do anything with women

The pronouns made a distraction from the story

Just a suggestion. Not all, I would say most of the readers use the "ole" skool pronouns. So when writing stick with them and be called how you want but write for the readers

Other then that excellent story

The story was great, dont worry about the comments about pronouns. Nonbinary people are valid. Your story was great. I wish someone could hypnotize me into popping my bubble 🥰