All Comments on 'Bimbo Virus Ch. 02: Revenge'

by TrishaHeels

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DocWordsDocWordsover 3 years ago

You’re keeping the story very interesting and I’m looking forward to where you’re going with it. You do need an editor. I enjoyed it.

Death_samuraiDeath_samuraiabout 3 years ago
Next chapter

Both chapters were an interesting read, please continue this syory

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Fun SciFy

Thanks for a fun silly ride. My suggestion for possible future directions might include that this treatment confers Covid immunity and becomes Brian's new product that his company markets. Sick customers get to choose bimbohood or sickness. You might look for an editor to clean up minor mistakes. Thanks again for the fun.

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