by justaboy2
Please leave a comment. I’m keen to know what you think and read your constructive criticisms.
Hot story! Very well written for a newbie.
Keep them coming! Thank you very much!
Yum!!! A bit of an odd beginning (Matt? Ryan? Highschool? No, college.?! A bit jumpy) But yesss does it cum together. Well done!! Will we see more fantasies of Emmett's cum true? Or more of Emmett and Shane together? Very nice either way.
Very well done. Good writing very good spelling and very few mistakes. All mistakes were so very minor not really worth fixing. As Vlar said great job for your first time. Now that you popped your cherry 🍒 I hope to read many more stories from you. 👍