All Comments on 'Birds of Prey - Twisted Desire Ch. 01'

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FerrumitzalFerrumitzalalmost 5 years ago

Very nice, and lots of potential. I'm hooked and looking forward to the next dozen chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great start.

Cant wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great story!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

dork42dork42over 4 years ago
Very good!

As someone mentioned, great setup, makes the mind tingle where it could go. Looking forward to more!

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