All Comments on 'Birthday Boy'

When the hell did 18 become adolescent? Fuuuucked up.

She should have been more understanding about him jerking off in front of a woman. And say that instead of masterbating to a picture of a naked woman or imagining a naked woman, he does it before the real thing. Too bad no handjob or blowjob.

After reading this story, I had to read the other three. I love every one of them. Howag, you have a style all your own ~ reinforcing the adage: Writing is An Art. I notice a dodge-and-mislead that throws the reader into thinking "what if." When I added (or subtracted) a few of those "what ifs" to the story line it got very interesting/exciting/probably-closer-to-the-truth. Thanks for your simplicity, honesty and modesty. I think you'll do well as a writer.