All Comments on 'Birthday Fun'

by Lynseca

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GinafrommaineGinafrommaineover 2 years ago

Nice story, sexy. My only comment was that at the start you should have said “my partner, Rob”, then used Rob’s name throughout the story.

PrefertosmilePrefertosmileover 2 years ago

I like this story a lot. Thank you and write more please!

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