Birthday Pool Party Ch. 18

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"Do you wanna play a board game?" I ask after Ian puts his cock away.

"I'd like that." he says with a smile.

We set a game up on my comforter, and both sit cross-legged on the bed to play. Everything is going so well. I know I have to take him home in a few minutes, but I'm enjoying every last moment I can get with Ian. That's when my door flies open.

"Oh! Shit! Fuck! Sorry!" a naked Ashley squeals as one hand flashes across her chest, while the other goes to her crotch in a desperate attempt to cover herself.

"Ashley!" I screech as the nude girl backs out of the room and shuts the door.

"Oh, my God." Ian gasps,his mouth hanging open in shock.

"Ian!" I exclaim. "It's okay, Ashley must not have realized we were in here."

"W-why was she naked?" he asks curiously.

"Um, well..." I begin. Fuck, I have to tell him. It really isn't his business, but a naked girl just walked into my bedroom. "I don't know what she wanted in here, but she's, um, she's sleeping with my dad."

"What?" he asks in confusion. "Lexi is dating your father."

"I know." I say, my lower lip trembling. "It's just sex. Marcia, Hazel, and Ashley like to play with Daddy and Lexi sometimes. It's no big deal."

"Uh, wow." Ian says. "It sounds like a big deal."

"Are we okay?" I ask.

"Yeah, I'm just, shocked. And worried." he explains.

"About what?" I inquire.

"Well, um, I'm not supposed to tell you this," Ian begins, "but Josh and Shawn are planning on asking Ashley and Marcia to prom."

"Oh wow, really?!" I ask in surprise.

"Yeah." Ian answers. "They're waiting until after your trip."

"Ian, I know this is shocking, but please remember that the girls are single. No one is getting hurt." I say. "There's nothing wrong with what they're doing."

"I know, it's just a lot to take in." Ian says. "And I'm worried Josh and Shawn will get hurt."

"You won't tell them, will you?" I ask, taking his hand.

"I won't." Ian promises. "Just please don't tell the girls about prom."

"I won't tell." I agree as I lean forward and peck his lips.

"This is all so overwhelming." Ian says. "I just had my first kiss a couple weeks ago."

"And now you're getting handjobs and sucking on titties!" I laugh.

"And seeing a classmate naked!" he exclaims.

"Yeah, probably best not to mention that to Ashley again." I say. "I'm sure she's embarrassed."

"I won't bring it up." Ian promises.

"Thank you." I say.

"I should be getting home soon." he says sadly. "It's almost curfew."

"Okay, let's get going." I say.

Fortunately, Ian doesn't live very far away. I drive him home and make it in time for his curfew. We don't talk much in the car. I kiss him goodbye and then drive back to the house. I'm worried about our relationship, the poor boy seems so overwhelmed.

I take a shower and put on a pair of panties and my robe. Then I knock on the door to Daddy's bedroom. I'm invited in and go inside. I reassure the girls that Ian won't tell anyone about catching Ashley naked, or about them sleeping with Daddy.

Heading back to my room, I toss my robe over my desk chair and climb into bed wearing just my panties. Part of me wants to leave it alone, but I can't. I'm worried about Ian. I grab my phone and send him a text.

Kayla: Are we okay?

Ian: Yes, we are.

Kayla: You were quiet on the ride back to your house.

Ian: I'm sorry, I'm just overwhelmed.

Kayla: I understand.

Ian: We're okay. I promise.

Kayla: Good. :) I had a nice time tonight.

Ian: So did I. Pool party when you get back from your trip?

Kayla: Definitely! Sleep well, Baby. <3

Ian: Sweet dreams, Kayla.

With a sigh, I plug my phone into the charger and set it ion my bedside table. Then I get under the covers and practice the 5-4-3-2-1 method so I can relax. It's been a stressful week, but I made it. It's spring break. I'm looking forward to a stress-free vacation.

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olblueyesolblueyes7 months ago

loving this rather long sex tale,,very erotic,,im a bit of a speed reader so i skim over the girl/girl sex as its repetitive,,the best part of ch 18 is stacy getting with steve(very emotional and embarassing for her) and kayla seducing ian,,she really is an agressive horny slut,,she may yet fuck her daddy!!well written, well paced.

JohnSimmsJohnSimms11 months ago

I hope Stacey can at least stay Steven's work wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I'm with Mr.Cheatham that Kayla and Steve will get together, but I'm also with Joker that story takes precedent and your story quality is known amongst your fans. I don't skim the sex. I don't feel that the sex is getting boring. Your approach is working well. I wouldn't expect Lexi to suddenly ask Steven to do a Hot Carl on Ashley all of a sudden or something. I also agree with RJR that I would like to see Ian and Kayla blow each other's minds. I also wonder where you're going to take Hazel, since it seems like the girls have someone except her.

rjr_1954rjr_1954about 1 year ago

I agree with the other comments about repetition in the story, but I'm a pervert and I still would like to see Kayla and Steven hook up somewhere in the story! I also would like to see Ian get royally laid by Kayla soon. I know writing is hard and time consuming but keep up the fabulous work as I continue to chapter #19. Five stars! More if I could.

winterizedbaconwinterizedbaconabout 1 year ago

Another 5-star installment! I agree with most of the comments so far. I have admittedly been skimming through some of the sex scenes, also because of the similarity/amount. But I am absolutely looking forward to however the story continues. I would love more of the character and story development that you are doing such a wonderful job of weaving. It is 100% the 20% of storyline that has me checking back so frequently for updates. Don't let that discourage you though, the series is great, and the scenes are titillating, just a getting a little repetitive.

If you want to keep the group sex stuff fresh some sort of conflict or goal that we want to see them achieve might be necessary. Then preferably slow burn up to that point. We've already seen all the girls do pretty much everything with everyone. there are plenty of ways to do this. Steven could take something too far with one of the playmates, a poor choice from one of the characters in sexual partner, one of multiples of the girls could get boyfriends that have issues with the group play, etc. The very slight domination that's been going on has been fun to watch and has kept the scenes a little fresh, but also Steven doesn't really seem like much of a dominant man so I'm not sure how far that can believably go (so far, they've been on point with how I see him, timid and playful).

I think it's clear from all the comments that you have some threads going on that have our attention and we can't wait to see how they shake out! Keep doing the great job that you have been doing and I'm sure to follow the story however you write it!

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