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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Well conceived but poorly written. Is English your native language? I certainly hope not since, judging by this sample, your command of the language is somewhat lacking. You truly need to have a beta reader and an editor go over your work before you finally submit it for publication. Hope to see more of your stories but in a more polished form.

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I have always loved the written art. But my poetry and writing never took off because I think I was not writing with true purpose- letting out all the perversions and sexy things. I am pansexual with an affinity for cock mysticism.