All Comments on 'Bitch Known as a Ballbreaker'

A bit OTT but why not?

Disliked the spelling a lot; too much like the old Cascade Fashion's way of doing things!

That's the end???? Did you get bored writing the story? The good parts were just getting set up!!

WTF was the point to this story? The writing was messy and the editing was worse. The story had neither a real plot nor any conclusion. At one point Susanna says she is not cut out for relationships, then in the hurried slapped together ending she is looking for a ready made family? Not only was the emotional side to this sadly hollow but even the business side was left with no conclusion. this whole story was, I suspect, an unloved step-child.