All Comments on 'Bite Me'

yoooooooo

Very definitely NON-human! Well done, 5-stars.

Did not comment when first appeared — just slumped down a bit trying to wrap my head … . Just read again, and still pondering while visualizing the imagery you created. The latter is what makes this densely packed scene of erotic horror so engrossing/enticing. You enjoy a wicked imagination and ability to translate it into words.

Thanks Migbird, I may continue this shortie if the urge strikes x

Sinister, erotic, beautifully written. Perfect.

Loved the last line.

Ah, Stacy. Perhaps stick to twilight 😂

It's valid criticism, but the casual cruelty of the story in defiance of the expected seduction was refreshing.

https://www.literotica.com/s/use-me-17

Link to part 2

I think the fact that you're averaging less than two followers per story, after 76 stories, shows that the quality of your writing is really poor. Not only that, but this is really dark and pushes the rules of the website.

Oh hi again! Lovely to see you have such a keen interest in my talent and progress ❤️

Intense, dark, and surprising. Not my preferred fare, but well written and effective.