All Comments on 'Black Owned Mature White Couple Ch. 01'

by JellyDonut2

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txskipper597txskipper597over 2 years ago

For your first submission, I think you did well. Just think, after only one story, you are already better than

BiggPoppaDom52

4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great first chapter , dont let the trollsget to you. as stated in the comments Below you have at least submitted atory.

Looking forwardn to the next chapter

beta_sissybeta_sissyover 2 years ago

Very fast story, I love it. I am sure I have read a similar-sounding story somewhere before. Looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I totally love the story so far it reflects a lot that happened to me in the past. More please

VeronicaPlakhueaVeronicaPlakhueaover 2 years ago

Loved it. The white bitch is going to be used all the time! 5*

dieter40sndieter40snabout 2 years ago

geile Story, schade, dass die Fortsetzung fehlt.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Is there a follow-up coming in the near future?

JellyDonut2JellyDonut2about 2 years agoAuthor

There is a follow up post coming. The plan is for an entire series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

One of the very best stories on this category , right now. Just avoid overemphasizing a supposed excitement over the whole situation. Unwilling excitement is one thing, saying "strangely" is another. Shame at the excitement is understandable but between the shock, the fear and the psychological use of sexual excitement on herself, it cannot be implied that this woman consciously wants to be excited. That's where the shame usually comes from. Keep writing! Good stuff.

beta_sissybeta_sissyabout 2 years ago

Can't wait to hear about the husband's problems

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I like how this story started. Still waiting for the next chapter. Will I see it any time soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMFG PLEASE I want and crave more I have jacked off to this 7 times and licked up all the cum like a good wimp so please part 2

fastbreakplayerfastbreakplayerover 1 year ago

I can't wait for DeShawn grandpa to have his way with sub-Lorain and her fertile daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

È meravigliosa, ma spero di leggere anche il prossimo capitolo

blizzard45blizzard4512 months ago

..... after a year of nothin; where are the next parts of your story?? 🤔

NJW7NJW7about 1 month ago

It would be great to see this continued.

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